Took a strange direction

Statue and the Sea has went to a direction where I didn't plan it to be.
 I think it's mostly because I'm using diatonic and chromatic mediant for the coloring passage, and a bit of 9 and 13. Reminds me a little of the pieces one of my seniors like to play, house music. The chords they use are pretty, I should borrow one to analyze a bit.
I have written the sketch for the lyric near the end. However I still think it needs improvement. Hmm...